‘I went’ – vos messages corriges

Je remercie tous ceux qui m’ont envoyé des réponses à la leçon ‘I went’. Ci-dessous vous trouverez quelques uns de vos messages avec mes commentaires. Je suis désolé si le votre n’est pas là, mais soyez assuré que je les ai tous lus.

On saturday, i went in to a feast party, i left from there late arround 3 o’ clock AM, end then i was on in bed all of my time.
Commentaire: Jours de la semaine et ‘I’ en majuscules. ‘feast’ aujourd’hui se traduit ‘festin’ en français

i am from tunisia i went to tunis our capital there lives my sister and some of my cousins i went to Sidi Bou Saïd, a beautiful touristic village at the coast with a very nice beach i spent a marvellous weekend.
commentaire: ‘I’ en majuscules, ‘weekend’ en un seul mot.

For my last vacation I went in Zambia with my wife to visit my brother who lives there. I was very happy to go in that country because I have profited to practice my English.
commentaire: ‘profited to’ n’est pas clair en anglais. Mieux vaut dire tout simplement: ‘I was able to practise my English’

Last week I went to Algiers, I HAVE bought many things , for yesterday I went to constantine to see my friend girl girlfriend , and at midnight I sow saw a movie in TV
commentaire: la semaine dernière est terminée, donc pas de ‘have’ devant le verbe. ‘I have bought’ nous suggère un fort lien avec le présent. A reviser: ‘present perfect/past simple’

Yesterday I went to Mont Ste -Anne at a meeting to meet up with friends. We are going a restaurant and we have a conversation all afternoon. It is was snowing, it is very beautifull day. we have had a very pleasant day.
commentaire: voire ci-dessus, l’auxiliaire ‘have’.

Last weekend,i went to the coffe café with my friend.
commentaire: ‘coffee’ – une boisson chaude; ‘café’ un endroit où on bois du café!
(Prononcé: ‘ka fay’)

Recently i went in to the site for looking for the informations
after i went to visite my familly in Effoulan (one quarter of my country)
I went to the church in on sunday at evening after the mass i went to prepare my week.
commentaire: ‘information’ est indénombrable en anglais, donc pas de ‘s’.

I went to the village for the new year celebration.
And last week end I went to a funeral.
commentaire: Perfect! sincères condoléances, néanmoins

6 comments

    • Ludo,

      thank you for this correction, I’m ashamed of my ignorance! I’ve modified the text accordingly.

  1. last year I went to kribi a town located in CAMEROON the weather was very kind so I spent my time on the beach it was a wonderful holydays

  2. Nice comment! Just remember to write ‘Thursday’ with a capital letter, and that we don’t say ‘the last Sunday’:
    Dimanche dernier: last Sunday
    La semaine dernière: last week
    Dimanche prochain: next Sunday
    La semaine prochaine: next week
    etc…

  3. HELLO
    I went to the theatre the last thirsday and I went to the concert of international songs the last sunday.
    I went to visit my daugther and my grandchildren the last saturday.

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